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Apollo's Lyre's avatar

This is awesome! The snakey hiss of "ease their suffering" somehow reminds me of Poe's "surcease of sorrow" and similar turns of a phrase.

I've found myself increasingly wandering out of crowded Culture City and off the beaten Path of Politics and into the foreboding-yet-fascinating Fiction Forest that borders the misty map of Substack, and I must say I am delighted with strange and wondrous things I'm finding there!

(Yes, I know the case could be made that most cultural and political discussions nowadays are complete fiction too, but you know what I mean haha)

Erica Sloan's avatar

Oh, quite interesting. A good desire (the ceasing of suffering) taken to a horrific extreme ...

Jessica Maison's avatar

Nice! Well told!

S.E. Reid's avatar

Ooo. Oooo!! Well, that gave me the shivers in the best possible way! 💀

The Casual Writer's avatar

OH SHIT D:

Such a great add to the urban legend!

Jon T's avatar

...it's damn chilly in here

such a satisfying snippet

John Coon's avatar

This is so good. Another piece of the puzzle that is The Suff falls into place.

The Chronicler's avatar

WOAH! This is amazing!

Cole Noble's avatar

It makes the Suff seem less like a dumb monster and more of an entity with goals we don’t understand

Cole Noble's avatar

Was not expecting the Suff to speak.

Leigh Parrish's avatar

I don't usually like when monsters speak, but in this case I thought it made the situation much creepier.

Jeff Kinnard's avatar

Holy SHIT. IT SPEAKS! I must say, I was not expecting this whatsoever! Knocked it out of the park, Leigh.